WT C Good effort - there are some conventions met here for a horror, the sound, the use of teen stereotypes, and there is some variety of shots (the close up on the actress eyes works quite well) - however you need to improve the construction of mood - concentrate on having the correct locations, abandoned, dark and threatening not using parks and streets in broad daylight. You have included titles but you need to pay more attention to the pace of the editing - it should build and get faster. A good start with aspects to build on
WT C
ReplyDeleteGood effort - there are some conventions met here for a horror, the sound, the use of teen stereotypes, and there is some variety of shots (the close up on the actress eyes works quite well) - however you need to improve the construction of mood - concentrate on having the correct locations, abandoned, dark and threatening not using parks and streets in broad daylight.
You have included titles but you need to pay more attention to the pace of the editing - it should build and get faster.
A good start with aspects to build on